几天来寻找效率建议

时间:2019-02-04 12:08:50

标签: java

花了几天时间学习Java(我的第一语言),我只是想知道是否有更有效的方式来编写此代码?

该程序的主要目标是计算某人的BMI。

它询问用户的姓名,询问他们是否要使用公制或英制,询问测量值,并提供带有小图表的答案,以供用户查看适合的位置。

目前可以正常工作,但是我试图找出方法来压缩代码并使之更有效(纯粹出于学习目的)

    import java.util.Scanner; //importing the java library utilities to use the scan functions

        public class Bmi0 //declaring my intitial class and making it a public class
        {
            public static void main(String[] args) //my main method 
            {
                Scanner input = new Scanner(System.in); // starts the scanner utility to take input fromm the command line

                float height; //declaring a variable
                float weight; //declaring a variable
                float bmi; //declaring a variable
                String option; //declaring a variable
                String name; //declaration of a variable called name of type string


                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your name? ");//prompts the user for their name
                name = input.nextLine(); //reads the users input and saves it to the variable name

                System.out.printf("%nHi %s, Let's calculate you BMI %n" , name); //displays what the user 
                //typed using a %s as the place holder for the value that is in the name variable


                System.out.printf("%nUse Imperial or Metric? (Format: I or M) "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                option = input.nextLine(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                if (option.equals ("M")) //if option is M for metric do the following
                {

                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your height in Meters? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                height = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                System.out.print("What is your weight in Kilos? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                weight = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the weight variable

                bmi = (weight / (height * height)); //calculates  the conversion and stores it in the variable


                System.out.printf("%nOk %s, your BMI is: %.2f%n%n" , name, bmi); //displays the answer to 2 decimal places
                System.out.printf("BMI Categories:%n Underweight = <18.5 %n Normal weight = 18.5 - 24.9 %n Overweight = 25 - 29.9 %n Obesity = BMI of 30 or greater %n%n%n");
                }

                else if (option.equals ("I")) //if the imperial option is chosen
                {

                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your height in Inches? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                height = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                System.out.printf("What is your weight in Pounds? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                weight = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the weight variable

                bmi = (weight / (height * height) * 703) ; //calculates  the conversion and stores it in the variable


                System.out.printf("%nOk %s, your BMI is: %.2f%n%n" , name, bmi); //displays the answer to 2 decimal places
                System.out.printf("BMI Categories:%n Underweight = <18.5 %n Normal weight = 18.5 - 24.9 %n Overweight = 25 - 29.9 %n Obesity = BMI of 30 or greater %n%n%n");
                }

                } //end of the method
    }//end of the class

1 个答案:

答案 0 :(得分:0)

一些想法:

  • 评论过多。 //importing the java library utilities to use the scan functions ...不会告诉读者import java.util.Scanner尚未放弃的任何内容。 太多的代码中的信息适得其反。这会使读者浪费时间和精力在无关紧要的细节上。相反:以明确意图的方式编写代码,无需
  • 格式:遵循标准的Java编码样式指南。像:例如,将开头{保留在if条件的行上。不要在括号后面添加另一个空行。而是用2或4个空格缩进新块。目前,一种非常著名的方法是google中的一种方法。

对于新手来说,您的代码“还可以”,但是正如所说的那样:大多数注释都可以扔掉,这将提高的可读性。接下来的改进是将不同的“方面”放入较小的辅助方法中,以避免将所有内容都包含在一个冗长的主方法中。